I guess your still improving or whatever... but that wasn't mixed so well. Sound quality was bad... alot of it didn't flow together either. The gabber part started out alright, then the strings came in... I dunno could use alot of work
Thanks for the review.
Not bad I guess. Your using sounds i hear alot (sytrus), so i didnt enjoy the song very much. Because all you used was an arp, theres obviously alot you could of put more effort into. Keep it up tho, you have some nice effects.
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Nice and dark... too repetitive tho. That song should of been alot shorter. It just repeated 10 times, then changed a bit. The diversity definately needs some work. Nice and dark tho... the way i like it. Go check out my song
As with most of my songs, I overuse repetativeness. I need to work on that... alot.
Thank you for your review, James
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You used VEC drums, and a few sytrus synths including Fat Saw. Its pretty bad if I can name ur instruments. Anyways the song wasn't too bad, sounded kinda original I guess. So get urself some new sounds, and u should be set. Go check out my song
I liked ur beat, sounded good. Wasn't quite dancey, cus it was missing energy, something u could of done better with ur synths and melodys. Your song was a little too simple, and repetitive, but u had a good beat so ill 5 it. Go vote on my stuff
You need to learn music theory or something. Your just getting used to FL, you can arrange synths fairly well, but your melodys and song structure are poor. Too simple and boring. I suggest take piano lessons or something, and also find some other sounds, those ones are used alot. Go vote on my stuff
Jumpy, random and poorly mastered are the first things that come to mind. Im sure ur looking for that proffesional sound as well. Which I don't hear in this track. I hear the melodys arent all that bad, so u have potential. Also your snares louder then your kick. Go check out my stuff
yea man, my sounds are prettry weak. thats what i love about techno, the search for that insane sound!
The beat was unique, and the synths and harmonics were relaxing. A bit repetitive, cus all it did was fade in, repeat a bunch then fade out. I think you could of put alot more effort into it, but your result wasnt too bad, so ill five it. Go check out my song
I liked this
I liked most of the song. I didnt like the pluck. I did like the melody, and it was fairly diverse... but the sound quality was a little low. Needs to be equalized a bit. www.kvraudio.com You can find free VST's there. If your looking for new sounds. Go check out my song :D
Thanks for your review man. yeah ive been looking for better sounds and trying to make my own, but to no avail.
Almost sounds like real techno, if u've ever heard it. Prolly not, cus its rare. Everything is a form of trance these days, but let me tell u techno sucks. This didn't sound too bad, but take your overall beat, repeat way too much and u have real techno. Anyways lol... learn to master, this is way too loud and distorted. Song structure and everything was good, just learn to compress ur music.
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